Alcini,Karin

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The character.

Name Karin Ryan Alcini
Nickname(s): none
Age: 17
Mutations/Abilities:
Enhanced Stamina
Illusionism
Aura Detection
Face Claim: none
Appearance:
Karin has an unusual color for her hair;pink.She thinks it was that color because of her powers and her parents decide to go along with that.Her unusually pink hair goes down her back and stops abruptly at her small waist.Her eyes are the colour of a deep blue which makes her look younger.If you just focused on her eyes,you woud think she was still at an adolescent age but the truth is,she's seventeen.

Karin,being so small,weighs only 98 pounds and stands at a height of five feet and four inches.She has grown self-conscious of her own looks.To make up for her height,she has long and slender legs.She hates it when everyone looks at them and she truly dislikes showing them off.The only time her legs are revealed is when she goes to bed.She wears short night gowns.

To fit her adolescent look,she tries to give people the wrong impression and wears what younger people would wear.Most of the time,she is seen wearing a small white t-shirt that shows off part of her tummy and dark blue jeans that cover up most of her black sneakers.At all times,she wears a purple wristband on her left arm.
Family:
Father - Daniel Alcini {Dead} Mother - Racheal Alcini {Disappeared}
Personal History Karin lived a happy life with her mother and father before he "gifts" started to show.Her mother didn't seem to like how her only child had powers that she couldn't explain.It must have been a gene but she couldn't find any family member that had any "gifts".Her mother couldn't take it anymore when her daughter couldn't control her power of illusionism.Although wasn't Karin's fault,her mother started seeing things in her head.She had just found out her daughter could create illusions and when everyone was asleep that fateful night(Karin was three),her mother disappeared into the night in hopes she wouldn't see those dreaded images again.This caused some grief for her daughter and husband but when Karin was eight years old,she was at school and her father was on his way to pick her up when he got into a car accident and died.Karin was all alone and before anyone could decide where Karin could go,she stuffed a small bag full of some of her things and ran away.She ran for a whole day and took a rest that night.The cops never found her when she started running again.Karin was glad of her enhanced stamina because she could run farther than anyone else.The next night,she made it to a town and apparently it was called BlackBriar.An elderly woman discovered her "gifts" and she didn't ostracize her,but gave her a place to call home.
Personality:
Karin is a charming girl of seventeen.She is polite and courteous in every way.Karin acts well-mannered and polite.Due to the way she acts,she can be very genial too.Cheerful most of the time and gracious in almost everything she does.Karin is very patient most of the time,but when she has been waiting for something for weeks or months,all her patience goes to waste;Karin even tries to solve things non-violently.

There is one thing that Karin could never walk away from:animals.If she saw an owner walking their pet,she'd immediately go up to them and see if it is all right to pet their pet.Karin is a bit of an insomniac,in the morning,she'll look a bit tired but the way she acts conceals all of that well.Karin is afraid of some things including accidents.

She is terrified of someone getting into a car accident because that is how her father died and Karin is also scared of being alone,even though that has happened before.She hates to be in a huge group of people because they might find out about her powers and ostracize her.
Fears:People making fun of her about her "gifts" and being alone.
Strengths: Even being self-conscious,Karin would be somebody's friend to the end.She'll stick by your side but by being her friend gives her something to live for and give her that boost she needs.
Weaknesses: A thing about Karin that most people figure out a few months after they become friends,is that she is self-conscious.She desperately tries to hide it but when other children figure it out,they found a way to get to her.Other than her pink hair,Karin's being so small can be something to tease her about.

You.

Alias: Ski
Experience: A couple years
How’d you hear about us? Neopets...
Other: nope
Role playing Sample The wind gently blew around, letting Rin's hair fly and swirl about her. Foolish people who walked the streets late at night looked her way and shock crossed their faces. It was probably Rin's clothes, showing much more skin than they should. Or perhaps how she could walk in heels as high as hers or how she could let her hair go that long.

Rin didn't care.

Let them stare. She always thought. Although what she looked like was none of their business, she just continued her journey through the streets and to the abandoned apartment where she resided. An elderly woman with her daughter gave Rin a dirty look and Rin just glared at her; her dark eyes piercing through the woman as she entered her apartment, the door slamming shut behind her.

"Filthy, happy families..." Rin muttered. "Walking around like that, trying to rub it in our faces. People like me, that is." What Rin meant by 'people like me', she meant people who had no more family who loved her. Who longed to be with her. All she had was the other vampires.

A deep hatred passed through her and was immediately noticeable in her eyes. Rin passed through the front hall and into the dining room where a thick layer of dust covered the table, the floor, even the chairs. This room looked as if it hadn't been used in years, which was true.

A dizzy spell came over Rin, her hand reaching up to her eyes as if it was instinct. She felt horrible, as if she was to puke. Ever since she was bitten, this had been happening less and less, but Rin was still waiting for the time to come when this would never happen again.

A tall figure appeared in the doorway and looked down on her as Rin vomited onto the ground. The remains of her last meal looking a sickly color of dark brown on the ground. Rin fell to her knees and onto her back. Her black eyes looked around the room. She was in her first home and she saw a man in the doorway looking down on her. He looked like her father but blurred.

"No! No! Don't be mad Father!" Ready to pass out as she always did during these short periods of illness, the image left a hallucination state and she saw that the man in the doorway was not her father, but a friend. Another vampire.

[Ciel Jean Donatien]

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Sorry, but the history isn't long enough, you need to put a space after every period, and it seems to be a little repitive. Perhaps you can fix all these things if you reread it?</sup>