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Post by Ciel Jean Donatien on Aug 15, 2007 19:42:19 GMT -5
A problem’s not a problem So as long as you’re still breathing The blood’s on the floor and your poor wife is weeping Making the bed never was a big deal Or cooking or cleaning or watching the kids But you’ve left that young lady all on her own Pregnant with your daughter and at home with your son Don’t you know a bottle of poison when you see one?
Just look at all these cans of paint Diverse as the people on the face of the Earth Signing your death certificate on a Friday Worth fifty cents and a ride back home To Heaven or Hell? Only God really knows
Take a peek at the old teddy bear That made your child so happy But now that you’re gone and away from the world All he needs right now is his daddy And his mother is so very tired From working day and night Why did you have to be so stupid? It’s your mistakes that change these lives around you
Just look at all these cans of paint Diverse as the people on the face of the Earth Signing your death certificate on a Friday Worth fifty cents and a ride back home To Heaven or Hell? Only God really knows
She spends all her days eating ice cream with a fork Your soon to be born daughter is sick Your son is a pile of bones in the bathroom And the dog is crawling with fleas and ticks What a wonderful way to be remembered As the man who let his own family down Watch what you eat, and watch what you say Because once you make a wish They’ll come true someday
ooc; I dunno what it's supposed to be. But I wrote it...
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Post by JC Bytes. on Aug 15, 2007 21:28:54 GMT -5
A problem’s not a problem So as long as you’re still breathing
I'm quite fond of the above part, and actually the whole thing in general. You'rea wonderful artist, Bandito.
I'm going to take a random crack at this, and say that you were writing a song, because of the repeating segment, which could pose as a chorus.
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Post by Ciel Jean Donatien on Aug 16, 2007 13:12:06 GMT -5
Thanks, Tera. My grandmother said that once, and I got the whole paint thing because she and my mother were getting rid of old, destroyed cans of the stuff.
And it's supposed to be some song/poem. It could pose as a song, but was originally intended as a poem. The first line of it and the first line in "chorus" were the two things I stared out with. =)
Heh, I have a few other things I should put up...mebeh or mebeh not.
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Post by ddddyyyy on Aug 20, 2009 22:15:48 GMT -5
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